Just an s5

[Graffix]

:shifty

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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0051-2.jpg
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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0057-2.jpg
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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0065-2.jpg
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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0067-1.jpg
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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0071-3.jpg
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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/lolteaser.jpg
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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0010-2.jpg
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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0023-1.jpg
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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0029-4.jpg
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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0038.jpg
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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0044-1.jpg
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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0049-1.jpg

feedback is appreciated

[Jedidiah]

think the pictures look dope... i like them.. but I'm not a photographer so I can't give you real constructive criticism other then "I like it, or I don't."

[Graffix]

photobucket kinda killed some of the blacks BUT im way too lazy to upload through flickr haha

[StayNegative]

thats a pretty nice set, do you have a cpl filter?

[westypoo]

dope ride! i gotta ask..where is it that you did the shoot at? what is that building....love all the steel garage doors and rivets! look like they would be dope stuidos IMO!

[FreshLikeSushi]

my grips is some of your stuff from the front is off center, makes it look weird
also, instead of walking around hte car for angles....move the actual car lol

and this
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0065-2.jpg
everyone should stop this
picture tilting was so 2002

BUT, outstanding exposures, and overall good composition. i like it

[Graffix]

thats a pretty nice set, do you have a cpl filter?

ya i tried getting most of the reflections out in each pic...

[Graffix]

dope ride! i gotta ask..where is it that you did the shoot at? what is that building....love all the steel garage doors and rivets! look like they would be dope stuidos IMO!

boston harbor :shifty

and yok...rule of thirds? :confused

[Ronniej]

pics are looking very good !!

[kramerbuccs24]

not a fan of the tilting like yokotas13 said but i do like the pics a lot as a whole.

beautiful car too! probably the best color for the A5/A5 except for that estoril-blue looking one!

[Dr.AK]

Like the pics, some weird angles in them, though.

And damn, that is the ugliest car Audi ever produced, imo.

[M.Burroughs]

Take a step back next time. Lets see the car in its environment. You have a KILLER setting there... remember that there's more about this than JUST the car. It's the car, and the car's setting. You're telling a story with your pictures.

Also, remember you can move the car around. ;)

Lastly, work on your composition.

[themadhatter444]

So hot right now. Great shots.

[87e30]

Not feeling the extreme empty space in nearly every shot.

[mad325is]

i like the empty space, it kinda creates atmosphere for the pic, rather then being framed perfectly infront or behind the car

[TW0R]

Some nice natural lighting.

[lilfotoman]

just test drove one of those. its a beast!

[Checho]

looks great, now start modding

[Withers]

Rule of thirds man, rule of thirds. You've got a shitload of open space on one side of the car and none of it on the other in the majority of your shots.

Also, it's usually a good idea to give the car room to move into. You want to create the idea of motion, even if the car isn't moving. For instance:

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http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x148/millcitydesign/DSC_0067-1.jpg


This shot would be 1000x stronger if you had open space to the left of and below the car instead of the right and above it. If the car was facing the other direction your composition would work much better.

Other than that (and the things people mentioned above), I really like them. The processing is moody which seems to be what most people want these days. And good job finding a great location :)

[Graffix]

looks great, now start modding

not my car haha but i do believe HRE's are in the works? im still trying to convince him to drop it...a LOT :shifty

and thanks for the feedback

[FluidMotorUnion]

So sick, love the styling of those.