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SofaKingCG2
11-02-2009, 05:07 PM
Heres another little shoot I did for a friend. using the sun as back lighting again, could have turned out better. The other ones I think are ok though.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2694/4069445471_0b6daacb1a_b.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3513/4069448261_965d711f88_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2448/4070204086_32f6105304_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2632/4070204860_beffc182e7_b.jpg

D-rock
11-02-2009, 05:09 PM
Use a little of dodge and burn on the face and you will be a lot happier!

TheNeek
11-02-2009, 05:31 PM
make him look up, not even at you... but just up.

SofaKingCG2
11-02-2009, 10:00 PM
Use a little of dodge and burn on the face and you will be a lot happier!

I'll mess around with it.

make him look up, not even at you... but just up.

Haha. Next time I go out and shoot I'll tell him that. He just looks down and closes his eyes when he plays.

Neb
11-07-2009, 11:50 PM
I think a little bit of cropping and they would really turn out good.

1. get rid of left side past the body. basically the house, the post etc, as well as some of that baseball diamond on the right. It's distracting and takes your attention away from the subject.

2. is awesome

3. I find a little boring, maybe because he's dead center in the shot.

4. is a cool angle but that fence on the left looks like crap and the white pillars under him are distracting.

my .02 worth

konky
11-18-2009, 02:18 PM
love number 2